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sheffield
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« on: April 05, 2010, 04:41:01 PM »
Hello,

Please take a look at the first chapter of a fishing novel.  Please provide any comments, criticisms, suggestions you may have.

it can be found here:  http://www.commercial-fishing.org/docs/under-the-ravens-wing-chapter-1.pdf 

Feedback can go here or to my email: richrayhill@gmail.com

Thank you

Best,

Rich Rayhill
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sheffield
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« Reply #1 on: April 05, 2010, 04:43:39 PM »
Yes, That should be feedback.
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« Reply #2 on: April 06, 2010, 07:00:47 AM »
Having read the chapter, I would encourage anyone with an interest in commercial fishing stories to check this out.
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« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2010, 02:37:31 PM »
Good reading! Hope you have some more chapters soon!
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